my head hurts too much to read it all...but the part i read was good
oh wow that was amazing...ur flow is great
yes im only 15 but ive been writing for awhile its my release from this hellish world
can totally relate
lies are what make up her being they make her breathe the lie that shes okay saves her from the doctors questions. those close to her see shes...
Beautiful enough to be used and abused. Smart enough to be abandoned. Graceful enough to ruin dreams. Alive enough to ruin lives. Dead enough...
OMFG JUST TELL HIM!!!!!!!! john told me he loved me and look at us omfg i love him i never want to break up with him and not going to...were gunna...
I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!! this poem is so emotional like all ur poems
haha i love it...it reminds of EJ HAHAHAHA...but now i know i have someone that love me YAY!!!! CHICKEN I FREAKING LOVE YOU
yea exactly wat i was tryin to hit...it was supposed to be the motions that were going on as the woman ponders on her life and her false sanctuary
ah i love it
yea it does seem like that. thanks for the critisism
thats really deep and i love it
ur were right it did touch me...its really good i love the way u right and ur outlook on the world
thanks yea i need to move the words around in that part a bit...glad u like them ill be posting more soon
so sweet the fruit of life once tasted upon her youthful lips so many years have passed since then, now that same fruit so tempting on the...
thats really good
hey welcome
welcome dar
i voted "dont know" but this poem is really good...it made me tear up actually...made me think about some things that ive done to the people i...
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