oh wewh...i thought it was me for a second...im so fucking paranoid about everything
oh wow is this about me...if it is we need to talk
i saw this shirt it said " i always do what the people in my head tell me"
wow thats really good
yea life definately hasnt been easy for me...but im still young im trying to change my outlook so that im not hating the world like i am...
thanks for the critisism ill take it and try to better my other stuff but as for this one its kind of hopeless
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awww thats sweet...lol i wish some guy would write me poetry...oh well thatll never happen so no use thinking bout it...
this is really powerful...i liked the 2 and 3 stanzas the best.
thanks i kno...lol not to sound conceited cuz im not
hey courtney welcome
k thanks bunches
ok thanks ive got a few like that but they arent really finished yet so i put this one up
yea its hard sometimes but its getting better i guess
its not my best...an suggestions on how to improve it? The whole world has gone crazy my heart feels drugged and lazy as you take it with...
its ok...idk y but its not my favorite
wow so simple but so powerful...i like ur style of writing
hehehe its funny
hehehe i like it we share a brain...laaaaaaa
i really like it...dreams are where we go to be who we want and to be with who we want and i like that you showed that not many poets describe...
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