its kind of a mixture of thoughts im not really good at writting love poems but i felt like it so here it is. critisism is welcomed What is...
me likey it especially the last line
its good i think but yea u culd make it more complex...but like i have room to talk my poems cant compare to urs at all
ive gone thru something like this before...u need to talk to her about it be completely blunt and straight forward...if she cares about wat u have...
go for if u want it and strive for it can happen despite wat anyone says
its good...i agree with CrystalShip if u want to make it longer try describing that place
beautiful...i dont neccessarily like love poems but i really liked this one
"to an end without choice. you sparked my heart and started a fire and left as soon as it started to transpire"...
lol i love it...we are captives together baby.
its really good...from the looks of this ur a natural...u asked to say wat i got from it. well i interpreted it as two people so alike but yet...
yea freak ur rite he is helping me. i wrote this wen i was still kinda hurt by the fact scum had lied but watever im over it
he is a jerk...but thats the whole point i kno him so well i culd tell he had another gurl without him telling me so...we werent even going out...
ur some what right about the whole name calling thing...it didnt really hurt as much as it annoyed me that he said that just wanting to hurt me....
yea ur rite they did teach me that where am i supposed to learn love from? the one guy i thought i loved was a lier and a cheater who didnt...
i was and still kind of am totally in love with this guy. we went together for a long time and then he dumped me for another girl...but after...
As the memories flash behind my lids memories of all the times like this where I was nothing but their punching bag not a living thing for i...
this is very deep. sounds like something one of me&my friends would write...well done
this beautiful and i know exactly what u mean gurl
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nope none i just recognized it from a old friend whos german
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