yes it is thanks so much
it also needs a title any suggestions?
this one is rather spurr of the moment so editing ideas are welcomed. I inhale the thick sticky air and grasp the grass around my body as he...
this is my favorite...i like them all tho. good work keep writing
very deep. i liked it...i also felt it drifting but i could see where you were trying to connect to points...i tend to do that in a lot of my work...
in my opinion i would use more emotion...make the reader feel the darkness not just know what it is. not bad tho.
welcome :) happy posting
welcome :)
maybe thanks frthe suggestions
i culdnt wait longer my curfew is b4 dark so i took it right b4 i left. ill try that tilting thing wen i go back up there. wats the new assingment?
^ i appriciate your honesty.
welcome. :)
hey. welcome. happy posting. :)
yea my parents taught e that lesson at quit a young age. it is missing something but i dont know what. thanks for the feed back vetty
thanks i can always id room for improvement. i didnt thik we could crop it thats the impression i got from the original thread anyway that we had...
all comments and critisism is welomed. Sidhe Pixies float around my head telling me secrets of an unseen world here it lays in the...
as always all comments and critisism is welcomed Hidden The world is an evil place where its people feed off pain and will devour you in a...
HP Photosmart M420(digital camera) landscape setting at a peir within walking distance of my house i tried to use light better as suggested on...
this is very good. like Autentique i wish i didnt know what this feels like...i like the expression you've put into the poem. good job. keep posting
i may be only 15 but ive probably been somewhat in the position you have...its hard see someone you love with someone else...but think about it if...
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