this is good. i can really feel the emotion. Welcome =] happy posting
^ thanks for the good comments...i dont know why someone would trash me like this...
i dont copy freakymetalchik...me and her are good friends in real life...so idk who the hell you are saying i copy people...i dont we think A LOT...
i like it...very deep and expressive.
^ thanks...theres more but ill post em later
ive been using too many threads so heres a few new poems all in one....as always all comments and critisism is welcome. Memories of a lost soul...
^ thanks all. Your words mean so much.
they are simple yet stunning in there own way. I like them keep up the good work.
Good work. My favorites are the first and third, theyre really good. The first shows the love and understanding you have with the person who is...
its short and to the point. i like it.
^thanks
^ thanks hippiechick
I wrote this about the feelings ive been having over the last 24 hours...as always all comments and critisism is welcome....
as always all comments and critisism welcomed Alone in a world full of followers I cannot stand the beating of my own heart; with every...
^ thanks
^ thanks for the comments Aidan, thanks for the comments...i dont take them as commands...your older and more experienced so i usually take your...
^ thanks guys. vetty...yes i got what you were saying and that would be a good direction to take it...but i left it this way so i could be read...
Depression is a Looker I stand in front of the cold looking glass what I see catches me off gaurd. I dont even recognize myself anymore; I can...
im not so sure about this one...its kind of a fresh idea that was mawling in my head...all comments/critisism is welcomed. Spectrum of Hate...
its really good...and true i hate to say...america is unravilling from the hate and hypocracy leading us...its a sad reality isnt it.
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