mmm these words would make awesome song lyrics ...like a prog song maybe... 'bleeds the colors of the sun' 'feast on her anguish' 'breathe...
oh fulmah you rock! I really really genuinely love this poem
mm nice prose 'highways and biways' is a good phrase
misery and mystery clashing mmm nice contrast
such an idiot such an idiot such an idiot such an idiot morose minger with your greasy hair such a psychotic idiot with your foul halitosis...
Oh man i fly against the sun with its willow glare i stare and saunter by the worlds shorter hillock, mmm wild eyed monkey child you wish upon one...
In a silent room, the mystery explains the heavy air Not there not there In a violent wave, the history engages heavy air- while us and them both...
Shameless oh so shameless wielding tart you sit yourself down behind the altar staring into the bread as it's broken. Sontag brings its halfcaste...
my friend rory from inverness was reading this thread and laughing
where abouts in cardiff? im in a scraggy damp house in cathays
does south wales include cardiff? I'm in cardiff. i met someone called kt who goes to the big green gathering and assorted fun festivals that...
I love the one you wrote about Jehu
thanks corvus, your comments and readings are very much appreciated. Most of my pieces are close to my heart and true personal.
[img] before the new glasses and just after bleaching [img] surprise! I look emo!!!!! [img] now i look REALLY emo:H
i've been reading some of the stuff off your freewebs site btw. A lot of true, deep stuff. Very refreshing to read.
wow danny looks cute in number 3!
sorry i wasn't more enthusiastic. had a bit of a tiff with my closest friend at college...meep would you comment on my poem...if you can?
i mean...it causes thoughts and hm still not making much sense! 'subconcious is key to you' that's a good line
i agree with your cliche comment. VERY cliche. doesnt make it bad though. it's nice :)
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