2 line poem challenge

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  1. Ranger

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    and the hill
    tumbling to a stop at the ole mill

    noticing a sour smell like mash....
     
  2. roamy

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    noticing a sour smell like mash
    before te final crash

    jack in the box
     
  3. Ranger

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    jack in the box
    that sly fox

    sour mash for corn squeezin's
     
  4. sour mash for corn squeezin's
    is enough to stop the old man's weezins

    slap it on his chest at night
     
  5. Ranger

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    slap it on his chest at night
    mash for a poltice and absorb the squeezins right?

    oughta cure what ails ya
     
  6. oughta cure what ails ya
    it's an all over panacea

    you'll feel fit as a fiddle
     
  7. Ranger

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    you'll feel fit as a fiddle
    high diddle diddle

    ready to jump over the moon....
     
  8. ready to jump over the moon
    in the month of June

    when the sun is still high in the sky
     
  9. rollingalong

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    when the sun is still high in the sky
    the lunch bell rings and today it is thai

    she moved stealthily through the shadows making sure not to be seen by the passersby
     
  10. she moved stealthily through the shadows making sure not to be seen by the passersby
    this was her one and only chance to fly

    a newly emerged moth to the light was drawn
     
  11. Fairlight

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    A newly emerged moth to the light was drawn,
    I turned the light off to let it see the dawn,

    Prehistoric moth how far have you flown?
     
  12. Ranger

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    a newly emerged moth to the light was drawn
    spreading fresh new wings to dry in the warmth of the early dawn

    eager to take flight on her maiden voyage....
     
  13. Fairlight

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    (I think we have two passages going on here Ranger...But we both chose the word "dawn" for the rhyme...)

    Eager to take flight on her maiden voyage,
    She first filled up on a bowl of porridge!

    The three bears were not amused...
     
  14. Ranger

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    The three bears were not amused...
    the blushing lass was shanefully accused

    baby bear having left the door ajar "Wings don't fail me now!"
     
  15. roamy

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    baby bear having left the door ajar"Wings don't fail me now!
    as through the sky i fly so high

    circling round the stars
     
  16. Fairlight

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    Circling round the stars,
    She frequented many cool rocking bars,

    And thought "Why can't life be this good all the time?".
     
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    And thought"Why can't life be this good all the time"?
    as she wondered bout words that rhyme

    hey mister what ya doin' here
     
  18. RetiredHippie

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    hey mister what ya doin' here
    Sure hope you brought some beer.

    People come and people go.
     
  19. Ranger

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    People come and people go.
    Just sip your beer and take it slow

    I'm calling for a pitcher o' stout....
     
  20. Fairlight

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    I'm calling for a pitcher o' stout,
    Something strong that's got some clout,

    And while I'm here I'll sip it slow...
     

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