a poem i wrote while on acid

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Cactus Juice, Feb 9, 2005.

  1. VanAstral

    VanAstral Member

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    the message is cliche, but the structure, 10 rows of really, really nice (by the end the word had lost all meaning and I had forgotten everything). and then the final word, a reminder to breathe, that's tops, slighty hypnotic, mate!
     
  2. Cactus Juice

    Cactus Juice Member

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    reality is just way more exaggerated and funny on acid. weed seems dull in comparison.
    seriously, you dont even know funny until youve watched barney after eating a couple tabs. ahahahah i almost died
    just be careful to keep your dose low, because when you eat too much everything just gets really peculiar and scary
    like when your dog walks up to you with a knife in its teeth, it gets a bit unsettling
     
  3. browneydgrl

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    oh man...im dyin'...thats funny shit
     
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