Americans are fat.. violent.. lazy idiots

Well hell, it's looking like we can't pick Italy as a valid example then... and I realized I've completely left out the "idiot" qualification...dear me, it's all so complicated...

 

3rd lowest rate on a continent of fatties is still something to brag about . . .

 

Nah they can brag, the bottom 6 or 7 are at 8-11%, that's pretty low even on a world wide scale. Lesson to be learned from Italy is drink more wine and take more naps.

Britain on the other hand, I mean I always heard British food tasted terrible, apparently it's also terrible for your health.

 

When I was in the UK on vacation, I had to rely mostly on the foreign restaurants to get a decent meal.

 

are we qualifying idiocy as the amount of education attained by adults? literacy rates?

 

I think we would need to define idiocy as: "Having political views in opposition to Amoureux."

 

lol

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One of our main dishes, if not the main one, is a cooked dinner. Stacks of vegetables.

 

in eastern montana, we have 'cooked dinner' as well

stacks of meats

 

even still, it's a traditional dish of Britain. I mean we invented Tikka Masala but I wouldn't say curry was a traditional dish out the United Kingdom!

 

traditional, umm, pemmican?

pulverized buffalo meat, fat, berries

everything else brought over by swedes - lefse and lutefisk hell . . .

 

hmm, montanans are fat - and stupid too [mccain won here]

lazy? montanans leave their engines running while they shop

violent? it happens, but not as much as in texas

if texas would just secede we wouldn't be having this discussion . . .

 

If Texas were to secede they would probably be wiped off of the map.

 

Mexico will end up taking it back. Their new slogan will be "Forget about the alamo"

 

You need to lay off the Sayyid Qutb books for a while there, Osama.

 

Mexico has already nearly completed its takeover of Los Angeles. The only city in the world with a higher population of ethnic Mexicans is Mexico City.

 

The American dream in action, during the late 19th and early 20th century Boston had more Irish than Dublin, and NYC had more Italians than Rome.

 

los angeles, what language is that in, i wonder who founded the place . . .

let's call it by it's proper name:

El Pueblo de Nuestra Señora la Reina de los Ángeles del Río de Porciúncula

[beginning to see the light]

 

You mentioned you're getting help with your english, so I thought I would help you out some more.

Okay, so first thing I noticed was the lower case 'a's in America. the word America is a name therefore it's a proper noun and must have a capital A at the beginning of it. I also noticed that you spelled "doubt" wrong. There is no 'e' on the end.

This sentence just doesn't make sense. It sounds like it was poorly translated from french. How it should have been written is, "I have had problems with my treatment of Americans because my government says it is racist." Notice there is no "from" needed in the sentence. After that you begin a sentence with the word "because." I don't know how the french write, but in proper english we don't begin sentences with the word because.

Alright, so here you began by writing,

First of all, the english spelling of the word "only" has an l in it right after the n. Second of all the word "care" doesn't need an s on the end. You made the topic plural when your wrote "Americans," you don't need to put an 's' on the end of "care".

You then continue on to write,

In my second day in english I learned about sexist language and why it should be avoided. You refer to Americans as "his," this is an example of sexist language and should always be avoided. After that you wrote, "worst," the word you were looking for is "worse," you'll notice that there's no 't' on the end.

Aside from the last two sentences which make no sense, this paragraph was actually fairly well written, good job. One gold star for you Jack.

Alright, I noticed when you wrote,

your wording was wrong and so you made it sound as though Americans think for sitcoms. While this is partly true, not every American is a sitcom writer and so it is inaccurate information. You should have worded that sentence, "surrendered so much of their ability to think in exchange for their stupid sitcoms." You see, that way it doesn't make it sound as though every single American is a sitcom writer.

Wow, that's quite the mouthful Jack. Maybe leave that until you're more familiar with the english language. So, that part isn't necessarily bad english, but is more of a moral issue. You make it sounds as though parents allow their children to become murderers when that just isn't true. Many murderers start out by killing small animals, perhaps the family pets and they hide it from their parents. Something to consider for when you write the final draft of this paper. Also you spelled, "dichotomy" and "patriotism" wrong.

The word corrupt doesn't need an 'ed' on the end of it. The correct way to right that would be, "further justify and support the corrupt culture..."

"Politicians" is spelled with an 'a', not an 'e'. They aren't the Montreal Canadiens. Also,

makes no sense. Are you saying that fat-assed Americans make machines, or that the American economic machine makes Americans fat? Please clarify in your final draft.

So this was a run-on sentence. It should have been written, "America will not tolerate being laughed at because she has no sense of humour, as the United States is believed to be perfect and justified in all she does

You mean like French internet trolls?

To endure something is not to agree with it or its effects. For example; Canadians endure the french and their bullshit all the time, that doesn't mean we agree with them.

Gandhi never raised a hand, so...your attempt at contrast isn't really valid. Your english was decent here though. Another gold star sticker.

Again, you began a sentence with "because," change that in your final draft.

"Controlled" has two 'l's in it. You also wrote, "worst" again instead of "worse."

Well, I hope all this helped you Jack. Once you make these corrections, whoever is helping you with your english should be impressed!

 

What a very nice thing of you to do man!

You must be Canadian.

:rofl: