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Barefoot zombies pretending to orgasm in harmony
instead of floating like feathers on marshmallow clouds.

 

barefoot vampires pretending to orgasm in harmony instead of floating like feathers on marshmallow clouds

 

barefoot vampires pretending to tippy-toe in harmony instead of floating like feathers on marshmallow clouds

 

barefoot vampires pretending to tippy-toe in harmony instead of floating like feathers on marshmallow biscuits

 

barefoot vampires pretending to tippy-toe in harmony instead of floating like corpses on marshmallow biscuits

 

barefoot vampires pretending to tippy-toe in harmony instead of floating like corpses on biscuits

 

wicked vampires pretending to tippy-toe in harmony instead
of floating like corpses on biscuits

 

wicked vampires pretending to tippy-toe in harmony instead of floating like corpses on water

 

wicked vampires pretending to tippy-toe in harmony instead
of floating like flowers on water

 

cuddly vampires pretending to tippy-toe in harmony instead
of floating like flowers on water

 

cuddly vampires pretending to tippy-toe in harmony instead
of floating like flowers on water are irresistable



authors choice...i extended it to make sense

 

cuddly kitties pretending to tippy-toe in harmony instead
of floating like flowers on water are irresistable


ive been shortening it for awhile now to try to get it to a point where it makes sense lol

 

that would be severely frowned upon.....sometines people dont use the correct tense or are afraid of my wrath if they also change a conjunctive...once bbad tried to fuck with me and i made him cry...he wasnt my first either...the sentence is 16 words....please do not shorten....feel free to start a short phrase game if you like


rancid kittens pretending to tippy-toe in harmony instead
of floating like flowers on water are irresistable

 

new rule! lol
ok your OP ill go along with it

 

rancid kittens pretending to jump in harmony instead
of floating like flowers on water are irresistable

 

rancid kittens pretending to drown in harmony instead
of floating like flowers on water are irresistable

 

rancid kittens pretending to drown in milk instead
of floating like flowers on water are irresistable

 

rancid kittens pretending to drown in milk instead
of floating like flowers without water are irresistible

 

rancid kittens pretending to drown in milk instead
of floating like flowers without water are irresistible

 

Playful kittens pretending to drown in milk instead
of floating like flowers without water are irresistible.

 

Playful kittens pretending to drown in milk instead
of dying like flowers without water are irresistible.