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  1. Funkateer

    Funkateer To swing on the spiral

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    Quick question anyone care to play a game with me i just conceptualized it

    place one word in a post and i say we collectively try to make a story or poem or song all by using one word per post
     
  2. Funkateer

    Funkateer To swing on the spiral

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    beautiful
     
  3. neodude1212

    neodude1212 Senior Member

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    A lost hazy swamp, far away
    In between ancient oak and willow trees
    Lying on grass, not yet bent beneath man’s foot.
    A boat of times and places past,
    Made by unseen hands.
    This boat where beauty was beheld
    And adventures lived
    Is now forgotten on this misty shore
    Never to explore again, evermore.
    Gliding through the water
    Making it’s wake,
    A boat of trees in distant lands
    Mighty trees, high and broad,
    Whose now humble stumps seat nymphs with
    Hair of auburn and gold
    A boat of a man
    Long dead and forgotten.
    Where might his dusty bones be?
    Perhaps at his Golgotha, perhaps in the blue,
    Or maybe lying in the tall grass,
    As his boat doth do.​
     
  4. neodude1212

    neodude1212 Senior Member

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    Adventitious Feed Overload​


    Slowly making my way down the shoreline, my footsteps are never perfectly straight. The sand has a shifting quality when it is walked on. My bare feet squish the soaked, grey sand down, leaving temporary footprints that at best might last for two minutes. Undulating waves lap at the bottom of my jeans, immediately turning them into denim cold compresses. Sometimes I lose track of whether I was walking in water, or liquid nitrogen. Leaving the saturated sand of the shoreline towards the dry sand of the beach, random gust of wind irritate the sands’ slumber, whipping them around and around concentric circles of energy. Millions of grains of sand whirling around in such a small speck of the universe, a lonely shoreline in January. One must wonder what makes those grains different from atoms in a test tube, what makes them different from universes in their own regards. Size is only relative. So how many beaches, within how many planets, within how many universes are being walked, all within a handful of dust? The icy tides of January freeze me to the bone, but the feeling of being so alive is well worth it. Benches of very weathered wood sit in front of the sandy arcs of the dunes, appearing to be reminiscing about times long gone. Climbing up the steps of the pier, its easy to truly reflect on the scale of the world. Age and size. To the left, gently rolling dunes, perfectly curved. To the right, endless blue, reaching out seemingly forever. Birds swoop and squawk in the air against a backdrop of fluffy white clouds, playing or talking or telling stories, while a few others float on the water’s surface, drifting along like some sort of spectacle in buoyancy.

    Even this vast and colossal sight of miles and miles of ever expanding ocean scape only begins to hint at something immensely more. The wood of the pier seems to want to tell a thousand stories. Stories of cloudy nights, with nothing but the rolling tide for company. More often than not, the harsh gales of winter winds drive off even the joggers and dog walkers. At any rate, people are few and far between. And this is how it goes, day after day of me playing guitar next to the sea, sometimes alone, sometimes not. Watching the foam spray up into the air from the waves is almost like some form of meditation. People sometimes stop by to talk to me or listen to me play. It's refreshing, to have a set of ears other than your own hear your creation. Maybe that is how God feels too. Idle chatting with so many strangers passing by only serve to further the mysterious nature of existence, and of it’s endless possibilities. Sometimes there are boats, way out on the horizon, fishing or looking for ancient treasure for all I know. The really nice days are when you can see a storm brewing way out over the water. Rain that would pass by but never get here. Whenever I home, I will have to clean my guitar of all the sand. This ritual is nice, in a metaphorical sort of way. I can never totally get all of it out though. I bring home a piece of what the beach offers, physically, spiritually, and mentally.

    There is much to behold during the day, but night offers a whole new perspective. The dark does not diminish your sight, but rather enhances it, showing a totally new side of things. With the absence of light, comes a black canvas on which the mind can paint it’s many thoughts. The birds of the day are replaced the scuttling crabs of the night. They are literally everywhere, running along, doing their chores, living out there lives. Bars and pubs behind the dunes began to become more active with the passing of day, and random bouts of laughter and shouting can be heard over the steady backdrop of a jukebox. What exactly, is the real difference between the crab and the bar fly? Cloudless nights are ideal, with a luminous moon that seems too close to be real, surrounded by her little companions, the stars. The night air feels so much different than it’s day counterpart. It is almost as if it has a magical quality to it. When the moon rises, I know that I am not the only one dreaming anymore. It's so easy to just stand there and stare, to the point where you forget which moon was real, the one in the sky or the one in the water. Is that just a reflection of the moon, or what it some magical light left on the ocean floor by an ancient civilization long ago? Nature is one of the biggest ego-smashers, in my opinion. It is a breathtaking thing to realize you are beholding the same sight people thousands of years ago did. Hearing the same crash of waves, crunching the same sand between your toes, smelling the same sea salt. When I die, all of this will still be here, and nothing will change at all. So it is, so it’s always been.

    There aren’t many constants in life. However, this small insignificant stretch of sand and muddled ocean water has always been there for me. I can’t even count all the days that I skipped class, just to drive all the way out to the beach. All that hassle and all that driving, just to sit in the freezing cold, bundled up on one of those old wooden swing benches, staring out at the horizon. Anything can be found out there, if you want it. So many thoughts and dreams, so much time. If everything we think we know is all just one big illusion, then let us be thankful that it is at least so beautiful. But I have a feeling, illusion or not, that no matter where I go or what Im doing, I will always have a little bit of sand left in that guitar.
     
  5. neodude1212

    neodude1212 Senior Member

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  6. cataclysmic cognition

    cataclysmic cognition Member

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    As I melt into the grass
    And ponder problems of the past
    As I sink underground below myself
    And decompose into everything else

    Starry nights they spin around
    Galactic discoveries so profound
    Gotta climb all the way to the top
    And perch myself in that special spot​
     
  7. Trippin' Billies

    Trippin' Billies Senior Member

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    great thread!
     
  8. neodude1212

    neodude1212 Senior Member

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    Blink
    blink​
    note
    note​
    Giant Tree
    The source of life
    How will your withering
    Guide us through the night?

    Running through
    These fields of green
    Teeming with life
    And things unseen
    Claustrophobia you’re
    Impossible here
    isn’t it nice,
    Having nothing to fear?

    Waves of emotion
    the glory of sound
    Cymatic vibrations;
    Are you lost or found?
    Is there a difference?
    I’m not sure
    The
    Allure
    That such an answer
    Seeks to provide
    Is nothing but fantasy
    Of the most bounded kind.

    Bullshit
    all of this is
    we write and scribe
    for unending bliss
     
  9. neodude1212

    neodude1212 Senior Member

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    sucked in by perceptions
    blinded by sight
    deaf people dream in sign language
    so who cares that you can sense
    and hear
    distractions render you useless
    adventitious "reality" will only leave
    those invested, ever begging for more
    this extent cannot be explained with your numbers
    that you dont understand anyways
    the deceived walk a loopy path
    marching on slowly
    and with misplaced cause
    you've passed that signpost before don't you remember?
     
  10. Desos

    Desos Senior Member

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    Falling deeper, without an end
    Upon me came a gleam of hope
    Reviving me, saving me, becoming myself
    Transcending all, I came to find
    That i am still human
    The stars will always be above my head

    I'm not much of a writer lol, but how is that?
     
  11. stalk

    stalk Banned

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    first, a single stiff finger,
    then, an entire multiplying fist (!)
    rips their way out of a
    carousel
    of swollen lark cunts
    so deep underground,
    all those holes that the hooded souls on the surface of Earth never found.
    "Freeze it!"
    and the symphony of meat-tearing is silenced.
    Still.
    "Observe the eleventh spawn . . "
    We hear
    pinny metal
    footsteps
     
  12. inthydreams911

    inthydreams911 Senior Member

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    hehehe heres a bit of nonsense from the ol noggin.

    i was in an ol barn
    in a furn got gully
    in rain and fun like a gat goot tully
    and fisin strings ran fishin strung
    and everywhere a voice
    a dishish dun
    wherevermore or whereeverbe
    another tale another tree
    another gook another look
    between the sand or between the book
    when myes take ryes and ol sense go stride
    then bell and whistles bay blow thy tide
     
  13. darthkacie

    darthkacie crazy diamond

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    I hate sleeping alone.

    still on my back with eyes unblinking in the dark, the rise and fall of my chest a silent, rhythmic thing, I wait for it to take me. it's supposed to be a thick, creeping, smothering thing -- a blanket of the driest dust with no room for light to pass. it's supposed to be instantaneous, silent. it's supposed to come like a trained, eyeless assassin.

    instead, the cold place around my waist where I'm meant to be held begins to sparkle and sting with memory. my heart can't quite keep up with the rush of blood that comes with the thought of the tangled way we fit together. the quietest movement of air fills the room with its surprise as goosebumps prick where I remember the trail of your lips.

    so it's another night of vivid dreams, cast in the forgiving glow of a long memory, shining light on places I want to hide, illuminating things inside me I was too weak to cut out.

    I do these things to myself.

    ---------

    this came the night after I came back from tulsa.
    something is weird about my heart.
    or first love doesn't ever quite fade.
     
  14. neodude1212

    neodude1212 Senior Member

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    Quiet night
    Holy night
    Black night; the likeness of a canvas that
    minds will paint, souls will paint
    walk the thin stage
    that sits
    betwixt
    conscious lucidity
    and
    restful wakefulness

    wood panels filled with grain
    build a bridge with
    your cousins in and of creation
    neon atoms
    exploding
    popping
    multiply and die.
    Remember that time?

    (Remember)
    (that)
    (time we)
    time we went crazy?
    time went crazy?
    crazy?​
    Timbre Tones
    That’s how I knew.
    That’s how I broke through.

    If they ever learn,
    it won’t be from me from
    me
    from me be
    wont be me
    wont wont
    be be
    from from
    me


    (It’s creepy -
    controlling death with alertness.
    the sweet relief
    is a must)
     
  15. neodude1212

    neodude1212 Senior Member

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    My eyes
    pop out my head
    (laughter)

    I stare when
    nothings there

    From the air
    comes forth
    the rise of the molecules
    gaze upon their glory
    their mighty glory
    bugles sound off
    and violins produce
    tearful waves of
    cascading
    specks of hues
    floating through
    this plane
    this plane’s glory

    don’t mind us
    we’re just passing on through

    put one foot forward
    leave the other one back
    where you are going
    where you came from
    It Is The Same Thing.

    awww, tilt your chin up kid
    it aint so bad
    these guys are just here
    to make ya
    mad = glad = sad

    or point over there
    over there, where nothing is
    there
    stare where
    nothing is ever there.
     
  16. neodude1212

    neodude1212 Senior Member

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    Flarin' up again
    must have caught the mad cow
    we always runnin from the
    dirty drunk man
    the dirty drunk man
     
  17. Shapeshifter

    Shapeshifter Member

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    If you want to catch the rabbit,
    that frightened creature wishing just to live,
    the creature scared from violance, pain and polution,
    you can't just chase and force him to die.
    You must learn to be still, harmless,
    you must learn to whistle like the cabbage,
    and it will come to feed from your leaves of love.
     
  18. neodude1212

    neodude1212 Senior Member

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  19. stalk

    stalk Banned

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    everyone I meet throughout the day get's woven.
    It takes dreams to shake them off,
    and some just sew themselves deeper into possibility
    from Memory; my tangled matrix; a leaf on a white willow,
    neighbors with a black widow, who's cymatic web I gaze;
    an oracle,
    like the internet, except Sanctuary.

    A new Element has been Discovered:
    Aquarium,
    all encompassing
    over old bridges
    in the wind
     
  20. neodude1212

    neodude1212 Senior Member

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    man, you write such good poetry dude :cheers2:

    I love this
     

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