Is it sad that I counted the syllables to make sure it’s in proper haiku form? Hope you’re doing well and TY for this.
I know my haikus five-seven-five, my dear D I love you always It's OK to check! I double check every one I write here! Take care! (xoxo) [Still staying with the friend...over two months now.]
That weak winter light Filtering through old windows And I feel the cold Seeping through the glass The yellowing paint that peels Revealing pine sills From trees long town down Carved by now-skeletal hands; Of carpenters, dead Their work--well preserved Their names, their lives, forgotten Buried in chipped paint In an old brick house Where each stone, each pane of glass Hides someone's story
Would this be considered a quadruple Haiku? Needles and pins and a leg sleeping again when balance is off friend. I can't stand it then I cant stand the needles and pins in my leg when my leg is sleeping ... Those damn needles and pins can keep you down my friend so don't let them man don't let the needles and pins keep you down my friend.