Do You Haiku?

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  1. HashtagInterested

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    It's what we make it
    Life under the suns glory
    Free like rock and roll
     
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  2. Pete's Draggin'

    Pete's Draggin' Visitor

    Life takes some weird turns
    There are losses and some gains
    Can't figure them out

    People come and go
    Relationships start and end
    Love is found and lost

    I open the door
    She's standing there with a smile
    A beautiful smile

    Deep glacier blue eyes
    Gorgeous and inviting face
    Thick long brown soft hair

    Pale white skin like cream
    Her cute little unpierced ears
    A nose so perfect

    Strong flexible legs
    Dainty ballerina arms
    A waist so narrow

    Such a playful heart
    Speaks her mind when she wants to
    Loves her family

    She draws and paints death
    Wants unbridled adventure
    Hopes the best for me

    Loves to laugh and sing
    Not afraid to say fuck you
    She knows she fucks up

    She sends "miss you" texts
    She thinks of me every day
    Always shows she cares

    Yet who is this girl?
    Was I meant to be with her?
    Hand picked by Misty?

    Difference in age
    She could care less about it
    I feel the same way

    She wants to move slow
    She asked me to be patient
    A guy once raped her

    She got over it
    But will never forget it
    She took power back

    Time will only tell
    I just move along with life
    Focusing on self

    Always on center
    Enjoying other ladies
    Bettering my health

    As I finish up
    I'm thinking about her now
    I've known her a year

    She knows my life well
    It will be her decision
    Right or wrong it's hers

    I'm prepared to leave
    Walk away and not look back
    Misty would want that
     
  3. Pete's Draggin'

    Pete's Draggin' Visitor

    Right as I walk in
    I see her on the dance floor
    Hair red hot as fire

    A short black tight dress
    With curves just like an hour glass
    Slow sensual moves

    Her hair smelled so good
    Her body pressed against mine
    Head against my chest

    She could feel my heart
    In a sweet soft voice she said
    Looking up at me

    The song was over
    She did not want to let go
    Just to hold me tight

    We had to let go
    She would watch me from a far
    I gave her the look

    She then nodded back
    Our embrace was seductive
    So much energy

    The dance was so slow
    Nothing could separate us
    We were so in love

    Love with the music
    We both wanted each other
    It was time to go

    She wore these high heels
    I watched as her heels come off
    So slow and sexy

    As straps unbuckled
    I imagined her bedroom
    Tight black dress slips off

    I shook out of dream
    There was a great disturbance
    It was just my luck

    The female cock block
    Her friend said I'll take you home
    I gave hug goodbye

    On went my jacket
    I still had a clever smile
    I got her number

    I will call her soon
    Next time will be different
    No imagining
     
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  4. Pete's Draggin'

    Pete's Draggin' Visitor

    The group greeted me
    It was a social dinner
    I saw a new face

    Hair was red with curls
    Our eyes locked and would not break
    Green as Ireland

    She reached out her hand
    There was a rush to be touched
    Her hand was so warm

    I gazed at her lips
    She could tell I was looking
    Her cheeks got bright red

    Our eyes kept locking
    As everyone ate and drank
    Minds kept wandering

    We all said goodbye
    She gave me her phone number
    To be continued
     
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  5. Pete's Draggin'

    Pete's Draggin' Visitor

    I've known her for years
    She felt bad that Misty died
    Very supportive

    Got a nice invite
    It was a birthday party
    Just out of the blue

    Very fun party
    I was not out of her sight
    Always checked on me

    After a short time
    I started to study her
    Body was so tight

    Million dollar smile
    Longest legs I'd ever seen
    I guess in a while

    She was in my head
    I knew nothing about her
    Ex playboy playmate?

    She could have been one
    Or even a Penthouse Pet
    I would not doubt it

    It was time to go
    I gave her a special hug
    So that she would know

    Next week we went out
    Some bars and drinks, drinks and bars
    Time to get her home

    I had to piss bad
    She told me I can hold it
    Just go at her house

    That sounds good me
    She's a good little thinker
    I drove the car fast

    She invites me in
    I finish going and wash
    She waits at the door

    I will stop right here
    You can figure the rest out
    I don't kiss and tell
     
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  6. Deidre

    Deidre Follow thy heart

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    Those are really good, Pete. :blush:
     
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  7. HashtagInterested

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    Those are really good
    They remind me of old times
    When love was easy
     
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    Daayyumm playa

    Damn, player. Pete gets
    The ladies. LL Cool Pete.
    Pete is the man, man.
     
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  9. HashtagInterested

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    Pete was, or is Pete
    Or is Pete not Pete but Frank
    If Frank, then who's Pete?

    If Pete's Pete and true
    Then how about me and Frank?
    I'll be frank, Pete plays.

    I like dragons and
    I don't always double with
    A puff puff then pass.
     
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  10. Pete's Draggin'

    Pete's Draggin' Visitor

    ^
    You both are so cool
    A favorite thread of mine
    Even more so now
     
  11. Pete's Draggin'

    Pete's Draggin' Visitor

    Glad you liked them D
    You made the best thread to write
    It's a great outlet
     
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  12. HashtagInterested

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    It's a great outlet
    our sun rises from darkness
    To light and I see
     
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  13. Deidre

    Deidre Follow thy heart

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    A new year soon dawns
    What will we resolve to do?
    That is the question
     
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    It's not to be or ...
    Nevermind, I resolve to ...
    Be better than now
     
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  15. Deidre

    Deidre Follow thy heart

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    New year, new haiku
    The moment that we live for
    Beginning anew
     
  16. KL71

    KL71 Yanks since '81/Fins since '83 :)

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    Walked for two hours
    In Connecticut's cold air
    Winter storm looming

    :(
     
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  17. Deidre

    Deidre Follow thy heart

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    Sorry to hear. But, I really like how you set up this haiku. :kissingclosed:
     
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  18. KL71

    KL71 Yanks since '81/Fins since '83 :)

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    Awesome avatar
    It is simple, yet works well
    D is a smart girl

    <3 :)
     
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  19. KL71

    KL71 Yanks since '81/Fins since '83 :)

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    The snow is over
    Football on this afternoon
    Roots for A-F-C

    :D
     
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  20. HashtagInterested

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    I went to the church
    I sat down and began to
    Pray out loud, I fell

    To my knee and then
    It was mother's day then too
    I got back up free
     
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