DopeSickKid's Poetry

Now isn't -that- a mature way to respond to someone you disagree with....

Better yet, do you care what he thinks? Didn't think so. Then why react so violently to someone you don't know say something you don't care about? Hm? :H

 

To -most- people who write poetry, their -craft- if they consider it as such means a lot. ~Most~ poets are a touchy folk and you've just become a prime example of that. But at the same time you have to consider your own rational...if you're posting here, you're exposing the most private, personal expect of yourself. Obviously you want to receive compliments (dont we all?) but you -have- to recognize that not EVERYONE thinks the same, feels the same, believes in the same things, and on a public message board you must expect that diversity of responses.
I see that you've only got -one- negative response which I personally think you either should have simply taken with a grain of salt, disregarded entirely or tried to -understand- why that person responded the way he did.

My point here is that on a -Public- message board, to assume that everyone will love and praise you is just a bit presumptious don't you think? And if you can't take a little bit of "heat" from just ONE person than maybe you really shouldn't expose yourself to this environment where you are bound at some point get a response that YOU personally won't like.

I wish you luck in your poetic expressions, but hope that you will reconsider your approach to this medium of communication. Continue to post as you obviously have a lot of people to appreciate your work and like it for what it is, as for those who don't, keep in mind that you're in control here and what they're stating is only an -opinion- not a fact.

 

I would start a new thread... just my opinion... be like burning sage and clearing all the conflict.

 

Sure. You can tell the intent by the message.

 

I understand, I'm just saying, try not to let it get to ya, that's all. Let him say whatever he wants, thats his right.

So just shrug it off and pay no mind if it bothers you so. :sunglasse

 

I haven't checked here in awhile. Hmmmmmmmmm, looks like somebody is having a pisser of a day! Dopesick, I write a lot and will post here. When I want to. This isn't the only board on the net. I'm especially good at parodies and that would really screw up your head. In the meantime, continue to write for those who like your material. I don't. And why that bothers you so much I haven't the faintest little squinched up, squirrely idea. Deal with it. Ignore the voices you disagree with. But at least first consider what they have to say.

 

memories of an old conversation.

 

Sylvanlighting, let me get your message straight. If a reader comes to these forums he or she must come to flatter or worship. Treat each poem like a religious experience. Amazing, isn't it. Well, I've never sat in a pew nor do I intend to and I'm surprised anyone who enjoys or celebrates verse ever would. The world's too big a place to live it in a closet and actually believe you're alive.

 

I'm a guest. Constructive and creative are always welcome.
The world is alive with beauty. All is one, alone is that which disconnects itself from the whole.

 

you curse alot man

 

Brandon, hope you got that last one. Yr one lucky dude!

 

aww that's sweeet

 

i dont want to annoy ppl by saying this, but i think the poetrys popularity is based off the "shock value" that encompasses his swearing. How much heat wil i get for this. I wonder.






in your picture you dont look stoned you look tired.

 

I love your poetry. i write stuff too, and surprisingly, your stuff is alot like mine. i enjoyed reading it. but wow...you're only 13! i cant believe it. well actually i guess i can because ive lived the same kind of life. its been a little better lately for me, im really beginning to come into tune with myself and the world around. idk, i still think about that shit though, its still me. whatever man, keep on writing and send me a post if ya can.

 

'no smile', 'soon', and 'your blue eyes are turning grey' are my favourites. they're really good. ur a really good writer, dope.
peace

 

hey man, i haven't seen you around in awhile. where you been?

 

ahh damn, this bitch is back... are you still being butt raped by a heroin addicted gay dude?

 

lol!

 

dude... sorry, but that was uncalled-for. he's only 13.


sophia.

 

DSKid,


You have a strong voice, and your connected to your emotions.
Two things they can't teach in school.

When I read poetry, or even when I hear words spoken, I don't always hear the sense of the words.

I'll hear the tones of the sylables as they climb and cascade, slip and grab-hold.
Note to note I catch the meaning in the feel.

There's this cat I met who played his poetry like word-music.
He picked words for the tone combinations of their sylables.

Put a verse together similar to a bar of music.
With the verses woven into a song.

That was then, now he forces his words to make sense, but they're still music.