DopeSickKid's Poetry

One thing that I feel, but I might be way off base, it is just my conclusion from years of observing and interacting with everyone I meet. First, poets seem to learn how to show their feelings in a clear and precise way that makes it easy for others to know exactly how they truly feel inside, which I think lets them know right away if they relate to the poet's personality or not, cuz there is no pretense or deception in most poetry.
The other thing that is maybe gonna raise some eyebrows is that I have found that the friends I have met who write the poems that are the most honest, the most heartfelt, the most 'straight up', and that do not hide anything.... these are more often people who had a rough ride growing up, have very little in the way of financial security, and have a very limited education. One of my best friends, who writes awesome, to me, poetry, has claimed to have about a grade three education, which I don't find hard to believe. Can't spell, and is always ready to use a string of profanity to make a point, and never lies about feelings. Lays it all out, what you see is what you get. And some of the worst poetry, imho, is by university grads, who are educated, but not emotionally intelligent, imho.
I better not say anymore. Sorry if any one who reads this is offended, it is just my personal observation from my life's relationships, and what I have read. The best singers are the same. All my favourite singers came from the wrong side of town.

 

no, that quite all right... you said you wouldnt post another poem again?

am i the only one who notices that his poems usually follow the same theme?

also, you say that you're a peice of shit in that poem... whenever anyone agrees with that, you flip out on them. you claim to "not care" and stuff, but whenever anyone pisses you off, you have to spend 2 or 3 minutes of your life to try and bring them down, with poorly written, profanity riddled comebacks... *coughHYPOCRATE(sp)ATTENTIONWHOREcough*

 

I know I posted this before, but it seemed appropriate to post it again, please excuse the occasional swear word in it.​

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FiretrUCK​

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It's the fuckin' shits, so fuck it! It really is fuck all.
Fuckin' right! You are as sharp as a fuckin' ball.
Hey Fuckhead! Smarten the fuck up! Get fuckin' real.
Right fuckin' now! What in hell's your fuckin' deal?
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Fuckin' A! No fuckin' way! I'm gonna fuckin' slay!
What the fuck? Unfuckinreal! Take your fuckin' shot.
We're fuckin' fucked! Oh fuck yeah, ya stupid fuck!
Go fuck yourself! No way, fuck you! Like I give a fuck.
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If you don't fuckin' mind, then I don't fuckin' care.
You're a fuckin' jerk! You wouldn't fuckin' dare.
Next time you fuck me, just fuckin' kiss me first.
Holy fuck! Don't say fuck! It's the fuckin' worst.
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Fuckin' goof! It's all fucked up! What the fuck is that?
You fucked the dog. Where's your fuckin' brain at?
You lucky fuck! How the fuck are you still alive?
You had nine fuckin' lives and so far fucked up five.
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Beats the fuck out of me how you fuckin' survive?
Take some fuckin' care next time you fuckin' drive.
Fuck up again...you'll take a fuckin' dive.
For fuck's sake! Fuck off before the heat arrive.
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Cuz fuckin' sticks and fuckin' stones.
Can fuckin' break your fuckin' bones.
But Fuckin' names will never fuckin' hurt me.
Fuck! You fucked with it again. It don't fuckin' matter.
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BlackGuardXIII
2:00 PM, June 15th, 1991
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I find it interesting that so many adults get so wound up over a word. Its a word, for fuck sake. I got kicked off a msn group cuz one of the managers didn't like me using a swear word. Of course, his threads were full of stuff like " Oh, that bitch, I killed her and roasted her on a spit..." and other lovely things along that line. He was offended by the word ****, but not by joking about murdering women..... and I called him on it, and the fucking **** booted me out.
I have found that that word is the 'real' bad word. Only real degenerates like me dare to use it it seems.

 

~*LoL*~
Silly fucktards!! (j/k)

Hey Jack_Straw2208, people are allowed to change their minds and 'sides, you are very, very rarely here in this forum so it shouldn't affect your day one way or another. I usually avoid/ignore threads or posts by people that annoy me, it doesn't always but usually works. Sorry if y'all have had run ins in other forums or threads.

 

I could see someone thinking that you were being insulting to him... And no matter how unintentional it is, sometimes words can be taken more than one way, and Jack could very well misinterpret certain phrases, like, "go fucking kill yourself." see what I mean? Some people might find that offensive, or even threatening, and certain fucktards ( had to use it, that made me laugh), will even charge you, well not you, your a minor, but they'd charge me. I know, it sounds hard to believe, but hey, lots of stuff is. I knew two girls who liked to call each other by the cutesy nicname 'puss ****'. It was hilarious to them, and I got used to it, but at first I was actually quite stunned.... okay I am always stunned, but you know what I mean.

 

...theres a cure fer that, quit sitting on the stun gun! Yeah, **** is one of those words where you better be great friends to use it.

 

I'd say it is the most feared sexual swear word, and only a couple of ethnic slurs have the potential to be considered as universally offensive, but imho, even the worst ethnic slurs, as hateful and disgusting as they are, are not as widely offensive as the c word.
What do you think? Are the two or three worst ethnic slurs more universally taboo? Is there a homophobic swear that is more offensive? I have felt that the c word is number one for a couple years, and am curious what you all think.

 

'****' doesn't bother me.

i love your stuff, dopesickkid.

you're fukken brilliant!

 

Yeah, most times it is, but my fiance doesn't bat an eye at it, and then other women are extremely offended by far lesser swears. Guys too, one guy I worked with apologized to me when he said the word 'crap'. He was embarrassed that he was so 'out of control' lol

 

A rose by any name smells just as sweet... and I love roses....wink wink.

 

i know its not easy to write, im into making music though, thats where i put my talent. and its not the greatest music, but i dont take it so seriously. we all have skills and whatnot, im just not into making poetry.
and i doubt "better" and "smarter"... look at you. repetative poems about how much life sucks and how hateful everything is. you bitch at me about trying to bring you down so much, but not a sentance before that, you say that i "dont have a speck of talent", and also, i guess you told me that i should go kill myself... also, the only weight your replies carry is the constant use of the word fuck... yeah, much "better" and "smarter".

i'll post my shit, if you guys knock it, then cool, i know im not that great, but atleast my stuff doesnt sound the same, and isnt all about pretty much the same thing.

www.myspace.com/theonekurkass

check it out, or not whatever.

 

this makes me wanna find the poems i wrote when i was young, i mean.. um younger.....


and post them.

ill find em and post them in this thread. maybe then ds, youll understand some times i dont say

 

that was so good i love the poetry

 

Dopesick.. just love you dude *hug*

 

i just fear its all getting a bit repetative, im not saying that its bad poetry...cos i like it, however, i dunno, its just all tackling the same ground

sorry if that offends, as thats the last thing i want

 

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i found out my parents were swingers when i was on mushrooms... sucked.​

 

a lot of my feelings expressed in ya poetry dawg. keep it up. ya could be famous one day. ya outta start readin ya poetry at an open mic night somewhere.

 

Your a great Poet already-EXPRESS YOURSELF!

 

ok, this is the last attack i am making on your poetry (probably)..

so let me get this straight. you know that your life sucks, you know that you're pissing away your life with drugs and whatnot, and you recognize why everythings so fuxored... but instead of putting down the pipe and/or trying to fix problems, you just write poetry and keep doing it...

muuuuch better and smarter..