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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by SoFarAway, Oct 30, 2004.

  1. Smiling_Rose

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    and her face; drained of bitter salt
     
  2. StoneyCrustyBabe

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    her coming of age dream stagnating
     
  3. KARMASTRIKES

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    lost in a world with opinionated eyes
     
  4. SelfControl

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    fear drives her eyes inward
     
  5. Moonjava

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    She is an artist with emotions
    A painter with tears
     
  6. saffronfrancisburnet

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    yet loves' deceitful,unknown to her..




    loven peace from saff
     
  7. TARABELLE

    TARABELLE on the road less traveled

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    Betraying her at every turn.
     
  8. SelfControl

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    the shadows lengthen under her skin
     
  9. hippychrome

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    then turns to look into a mirror, looks into / through her eyes and directly into her being as a whole, will she see she shining light behind the clouds of her own confusions?
     
  10. SelfControl

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    the mirror smiles a disgusting sneer back, and drops impossibly quickly onto the concrete.
     
  11. TARABELLE

    TARABELLE on the road less traveled

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    Shattering with a silvery explosion of light
     
  12. FreakyJoeMan

    FreakyJoeMan 100% Batshit Insane

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    Which quickly dims and dies
     
  13. hippychrome

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    A neon blue glow she does see over her eyes, + in her soul a light all bright brings hope to her being as a whole.
     
  14. 7river

    7river on a distinguished path

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    the reflection gone

    she closes her eyes
     
  15. hippychrome

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    so within her minds eye she sees more inspiration + in another painting does she does start to releave her frustrations.
     
  16. FreakyJoeMan

    FreakyJoeMan 100% Batshit Insane

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    And she screams with her fingers GODDAMMIT ALL!
     
  17. EternalHunter

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    And quickly erases the shadow puppets from the wall
     
  18. Orsino2

    Orsino2 Hip Forums Supporter HipForums Supporter

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    Ring ding-a-lingy ding ding, ring ding-a-ling ding ding ding ding
     
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