My Lady of Graces

you people confuse me...
expression is expression, who gives a fuck if it's mastery of language or original enough for your standards...
i love reading what other people write, everyone is unique in their writing and expressions
this is hipforums, not the pulitzer prize forums..

 

Thank you all for your crit on my work, but it still seems that not one member who had something to say has even proved their worth as writer. If i'm correct you're all just practicing poets who have something to prove, so you talk like you know about entering the language, or even understanding it.

It's funny how one member gives me a critique and when I respond, all of his forum friend bash me along with him. It's kind of pathetic how people follow and don't have a mind of their own, so on that note I can not associate with writers or so called writers of that calibre, bargin basement poets, who need to find themselves before they can their voice.

Cheers!!

 

Oh baby, you're so vicious!

 

Wow, you're a pompous asshole. I wasn't bashing your work, nor was I backing up BSR (though I agreed with him to a point). I said that your work was good, and gave some constructive criticism; you chose to ignore it and instead puff up your chest, trying to prove your worth by the fact that your work has been published. Why? Because you're so fucking good? No. It's not that hard to get poetry published. I suggested that you needed to learn to take criticism. You didn't think so. All I can suggest now is that you keep your work to yourself.

I also find it kind of strange that someone who has supposedly published multiple collections of poetry is looking for feedback here. Care to link to any of your publications? No, probably not.

EDIT: Saw your MySpace. Egomaniac much?

 

Awww, very sweet poem, thanks for sharing ~~*

 

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