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I really don't have one. I guess the favorite one I wrote would be.
Hot is Winter

Fields of summer​

Fields of glass​

All have come​

But now they pass​

Hot is winter cold is spring​

Both bring death upon their wings​

And I, I’m trapped
within this burning breeze

Save, save me now I beg and plead​

Our fates are tied like bands of gold​

Resting on the finger cold​

Time is shadows​

A breathless breeze​

Night clings on​

Slayed it flees​

Time, it erodes consuming me​

Come, will you come save me please​

Her eyes are shadows​

Her life it ebbs​

Kill the flowers​

She won’t be led​

Her heart it throbs, about to burst​

Touch her now relieve the thirst​

Hot is winter cold is spring​

Our lives flash by give them wings​

By: Thad Wooden​

 

man,, I just took acid..

I must be crazy..
Im a feeling good and I just felt my heart a putter as the side jicked in and shits getting vivid.. hahahahah;''

 

I wish I had some acid. Just 2c-i.

 

cid kicked in.

 

Yeah I was the same way man. If my rents hadn't saved em on my pc I'd not have these ones. Most of my best ones I threw away.

 

The ones you posted being as good as they are, I'd love to read the "best ones". You're a very talented poet man. You should be proud of that shit, seriously.

 

Oh cool we're sharing poems, time to inflate my ego!:sifone:

Anyways though, I don't believe this is my best, but I think cause of the twist at the end and the fact it rhymes people seem to like. Also maybe it's cause I've done too many drugs but most of my poems are pretty metaphor loaded, this one is pretty straight to the point:

"Fear of Reflection"
I saw a cadaverous girl on the corner today,
She cut her wrists to make the pain go away.
I looked into her deep, faded eyes,
And all I could do was sigh.
She was epitome of feminine grace.
Her body clothed in silk and lace.
Her face pale and delicate like a rose.
From her sunken cheeks, to her skinny nose.
I wish I had helped her, or changed the past.
I knew her all my life, but our friendship did not last.
If only I had not had to see her every day.
Maybe if I was able to keep my feelings of hate at bay.
If only I had thought about everything about her that was great.
Maybe I would've done something to change her fate.
Death now creeps up on her though.
It seems the blood can't keep up it's flow.
It's a shame I now love her madly though.
I want one more look at her face.
So I hold up my mirror and look at my face.
And think to myself, this is what it's like when love and death embrace.
Finally the world goes dark, as the blood flows down my silk and lace.

 

Thanks. Glad to know my english teacher wasn't really lyin' to me.
Well I'm gonna leave all you rappers to your lyrical insanity an hit the sack, peace out. :sifone:

 

anybody know how Id do this?

I want to western union money without leaviung the house. online. Its as easy as ordering stuff right.. Ive used it a million time., but always went to the place to do it..
I guess Im going to have to just do it how..
hhahaha took me months to become a member her too I dont like us CC online.

 

mmay be I should be tripping and di it .

 

When you do it online can you make a security question? For the receiver not having an ID.

 

boy I dont know but this WU site is slow

 

oops now I lost it got to start all over.. hahab a

 

Whatcha orderin?

 

pussy

 

hahaha

 

hahaha...

 

no Im sending money to a friend and believe it or not its for gasloine.. well thats what he say..

 

I want to be a balance beam...