Poetry In Bloom v2.0

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by inbloom, May 17, 2006.

  1. indian~summer

    indian~summer yo ho & a bottle of yum

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    i like them alot :D
    the untitled one is really good #15
    and the last one you did the whole thing i really like it :D
     
  2. inbloom

    inbloom as the crow flies...

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    Awww, thanks alot indian~summer! I'm glad you enjoyed them! :D
     
  3. Apples+Oranjes

    Apples+Oranjes Bekkasaur

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    No no no, you misunderstood what I said. I understood why you used the periods, and I think that was clever and creative. It was just hard on the eyes, is all.

    Just giving you a pro and con ;)

    And yes, I think it was a good idea to retype it the same, it wouldn't have been the same material without it, and wouldn't have made sense without the periods.

    It was a bit hard for me to follow, but I really liked the almost "innocent" creativity in it, using the periods for the space bar. It was almost kid-friendly that way. It was like a drawing, but words instead of pictures, does that make any sense??

    I wasn't saying I didn't like it... and I read through the poem well enough to understand why you used periods :sunglasse
     
  4. inbloom

    inbloom as the crow flies...

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    Lol, relax tardo. I knew you weren't puttin' me down. ;)

    Thanks for the comments, hun. :)
     
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