Poetry In Bloom

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by inbloom, Oct 7, 2005.

  1. inbloom

    inbloom as the crow flies...

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    Thank you, very much, Treefiddy. I appreciate your comments alot. :)

    And thanks, as always, to Bekka. Your words are so inspiring, and I'm glad you enjoy my work so much. Love yah, babe. :)
     
  2. inbloom

    inbloom as the crow flies...

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    I've already posted this piece before, but I recently revised it, and finished recording the song it goes to. You can hear the song, here.

    "sandbox"
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    miles away,
    in an old apartment
    memories are burned away,
    in a haze of smoke.

    open limb fascination,
    this bitter depravity shows
    tendencies of solitude

    outwardly,
    this combustion of
    raw Earth matter
    can be seen...

    open limb fascination,
    this bitter depravity shows
    tendencies of solitude

    all insane eyes & reaching hands
    arms caress the frays of time, my mind
    sever my fingers & lock the door
    a square space big enough to fit you & me
     
  3. Apples+Oranjes

    Apples+Oranjes Bekkasaur

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    eye love yer ass toooo [​IMG]

    And no need to thank really [​IMG]
     
  4. inbloom

    inbloom as the crow flies...

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    You lie! :p

    And yes, there is need to thank! You're one of the sweetest people I know, and you're always so nice to me. :)
     
  5. Apples+Oranjes

    Apples+Oranjes Bekkasaur

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    This is for inbloom:

    This boy named James
    is an awesome poet
    but he doesn't know it
    He also has dreadlocks
    and entertains me with
    hours of great talks :)
    Dude is so hot
    and I like him
    Quite a lot.

    see... this is why I'M not the poet around here. :)

    <3333

    yer my favorite.
     
  6. inbloom

    inbloom as the crow flies...

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    dsggnkljsghghksd AAAAWWWW!!!!! HOW FUCKING CUTE ARE YOU?!?!

    yer my favourite, too. :)
     
  7. Lozi

    Lozi Senior Member

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    james your guitar playing is squeaky and hard and cool at the same time :D hehe it's amusing to listen to :) 'a patient outcome'...nice bass notes....*makes an appreciative mmm sound*
    'azure' is exciting at the beginning with the fast strumming..almost...spanish siesta....whsipering.... yippeee nice style :D
     
  8. inbloom

    inbloom as the crow flies...

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    Awww, thank you Lozi! There's supposed to be more songs on there, but my internet crapped out before I had a chance to finish uploading...

    I'm actually nearly finished my second CD, and I've already finished my first. I'm going to try my damndest to get the rest online, so that people can hear them all and decide if maybe they want a copy of any of the CDs.

    I'll update here or somewhere when that's all done! :)
     
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