Rhymes or Reason

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  1. BJintheUK

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    Here's a ditty for the day.

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    Dreams

    Monday morning, dull but clear
    this is where we sell dreams here
    dreams of fortune dreams of fame
    to me they all seem quite the same
    but for others living different ages
    some of whom are wise like sages
    yet some are still quite bright and young
    hoping for a dream to come along
    and sweep them off their feet to fly
    for them the time slides slowly by
    while looking up and looking outward
    they still hope for a message about
    how they should change their lives to be
    more successfull than you and me

    for them the time will never come
    because their dreams can never run
    like a river flowing onward
    always further always moving
    slowly yet inexorably
    from here to there and now to then
    as time itself flows fluidly
    and lives bend with it willingly
    to shape and guide us as we age
    from bright young thing to wizened sage
    yet for all the pain and loss and sorrow
    there's always today and always tomorrow
    so don't give up on your dreams yet
    they're still to live for and you bet
    as long as there's a dream to live
    there's someone somewhere happy to give
    that dream a go and try for size
    as though t'were meant for their own eyes

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    Speak soon! :)
     
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  2. BJintheUK

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    Here's another ditty for the day

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    Another day



    It's another day today
    not like it was yesterday
    when the sun shone weakly through
    the high clouds obscuring the view
    for then it was a typical winter's day
    not that it's winter yet I hear you say
    that's not till December's almost gone
    when autumn leaves us cold and drawn
    and the year end looms ahead
    and another year falls down dead
    while new life hides inside the ground
    waiting for spring to come around
    to shoot aloft into the air
    and dispel our despair
    at never seeming to grow at all
    while all the time the hidden wall
    of secrets hides the future from us
    waiting to spring them all around
    when they burst forth from out the ground

    so don't despair when winter comes
    it'll soon be gone and when it's done
    we'll all feel better in ourselves
    the sap will rise the blood will course
    through veins that creak from lack of use
    but with some use they'll soon be supple
    letting us move with sinewed muscle
    loosening our winter bonds
    as the new year brings new life upon
    the world we see and the world we hear
    and as the darkness starts to clear
    we see at last the hidden light
    from whence all our thoughts seem to right
    the world's most out of kilter sight
    the lack of balance hanging there
    for us to wonder at but not despair
    for though the world may seem at odds
    it's not for us but for the gods
    to deal with as and when they can
    for they're quite busy I understand
    dealing with the day today
    not like it was yesterday
    when the sun shone weakly through
    and I could barely even see you
    though you stood right there
    in front of me
    and smiled

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    :)
     
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  3. BJintheUK

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    And perhaps another ditty to round the day off


    The day fades slowly into the West
    the darkness creeps in behind it
    soon the colours will all run to grey
    and shadows will rule the evening
    so start your homeward journey now
    don't wait till the last light falls
    for leaving it so late to move
    will leave you breathless tired and cold

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    :)
     
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  4. Candy Gal

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    Love these BJ. Xxxx
     
  5. BJintheUK

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    Gives me something to do as I sit here slowly recovering from what I think is Covid. Me and the missus both have it, and it's been a pretty awful four weeks so far since we both went down with it. Trying to think of things to write helps to alleviate the boredom, and take my mind off the discomfort of being ill. So expect more musings over the next couple of weeks, as I try to claw my way back to civilisation from the abyss of uncaring darkness that seems to fill my thoughts otherwise. :)
     
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  6. Candy Gal

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    So sorry you are both unwell.
    There is also a nasty normal virus going around. Hopefully you will both be well soon. X
     
  7. BJintheUK

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    It's late and I'm tired, but with nothing to get up for tomorrow I might as well sit here and write something to keep my brain occupied. So...



    Another week rolls into view
    but what will each day hold
    we'll have to wait until the new
    day starts to wearily unfold
    "wearily?" I hear you say
    "but why would you say that?"
    I'll tell you why, coz it's the way
    that every Monday seems so flat
    you know the way the weather holds
    itself in quiet reserve
    until it knows which way the folds
    of time will decide what it deserves
    then when it's figured out the way
    the future days must roll
    it'll unobtrusively change the day
    to match the everlasting whole

    :)
     
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    Wonderful x
     
  9. BJintheUK

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    Something to ponder on...



    Another night another insight
    or so I wish it was
    but sadly no it's just not right
    to have to wish because
    reality is very clear
    it doesn't play with facts
    instead it messes with our best guesses
    but while it does it won't confess
    to bending what it knows it shouldn't
    all the things we do or say
    but reality, surely it wouldn't
    play us in this cruel way
    a way it can amuse itself
    at our expense I want to say
    but of course I know it can't
    reality is every day
    it's not able to put a slant
    on what we think or what we say

    and so I'll quietly say goodnight
    and wander slowly out of sight
    up the stairs turn to the right
    to clean my teeth and make them bright
    then off to bed and dreams tonight
    until tomorrow clear and bright
    comes through the curtains morning light
    and who knows perhaps another insight?


    :)
     
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  10. Candy Gal

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    A wonderful day for you I hope.
    So up you climb that wooden slope
    Come tomorrow and say some more
    I will read it, that's for sure X
     
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  11. BJintheUK

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    Thought for the day!



    It's getting late and you know I hate it
    when I get this tired
    I've tried all day to bat away
    the feeling that's transpired
    but knowing this you know I miss
    the work now I'm retired
    the work was mine to do and fine
    but now I feel I'm mired
    in what to do now that I'm through
    with work though not been fired
    but instead I'll rest my head
    just here till I'm inspired
    to write more lines, but that takes time
    and thought to be desired
    when tapping keys so let me please
    write words that are admired
    and after all, I'd be appalled
    if circumstance conspired
    to make me fail I'd want to bail
    but knowing I'd misfired
    I'd struggle on till thought was gone
    and my poor brain was wired
    I'd try to link, and yes to think
    that I was still required
    but knowing this I guess I miss
    those poems I have sired
    so let me sleep no doubt I'll keep
    on writing till rehired


    :)
     
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  12. Candy Gal

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    I am keeping you BJ.
    Good night sleep tight. X
     
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  13. BJintheUK

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    I'll try to keep up the output, but struggle occasionally to think of what to put on the screen, so whatever appears is what's just tumbled from my brain and through my fingers onto the keys.


    So where's the day gone, it was here but now no more
    the dark has consumed it, today's gone forever
    with tiredness chasing me across the floor
    I slowly climb stairs tired beyond measure
    but hey
    it'll soon be a new day
    new lightness and form that follows the night
    with brand new shafts of energy and light
    perhaps I'll feel better in the morning sun
    or will I blink and moan and instead
    and just pull the covers over my head
    to hide from the light as I always do
    "it's far too early!" I'm telling you
    far too early to be bouncing and bright
    for me it still feels like the middle of the night
    so leave me to rest
    for me it's the best



    :)
     
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  14. Candy Gal

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    Always love your poems x
     
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  15. BJintheUK

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    So there I was, in the kitchen, making coffee for me and the missus. She said she was thinking of what to have for lunch. I suggested she have a banana. "I've got a banana in my bag" she said. I thought, what an interesting name for a song or poem.


    "I've got a banana in my bag"
    she said
    it's been there for several days
    I guess it's gone soft and started to sag
    who knows the time it's wasted away
    and all the time the fruit both long and yellow
    has waited patiently
    for someone to rescue it from where below
    it's hidden from what we see
    so if she forgets it's lying slack
    and plonks her bag down hard
    it could break the poor banana's back
    and stretch it's skin so far
    that finally it breaks and then
    I wonder what we'd see
    yellow muck spread wide and thin
    a total catastrophe!

    the moral of this story
    if such indeed were true
    is eat your banana while it's fresh
    or it could make a mess of you


    :)
     
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    Busy Soonday cooking Roast
    Bring the neighbours, have a toast
    I always cook, far too much
    Get some help, lets go Dutch
    I do love cooking, that's the thing
    Trouble being, much goes in the bin
     
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  17. BJintheUK

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    Candy,

    Get a dog!

    :)
     
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    Now Candy has me has her pet cat I can expect chocolate milk on a daily basis.
     
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    LOL XXXX
     
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