Rhymes or Reason

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  1. BJintheUK

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    Here's another poem I wrote. This one's about Morning Glory, in all its connotations!!

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    The sight of a huge morning glory they say
    can brighten up even the darkest of days
    as well as the petals shaped just like a heart
    the trumpet shaped flower's another main part

    Some form a vine that can twine for support
    while others stand proud, like a king they hold court
    but while on the subject I really must mention
    the lone soldier boy as he stands to attention

    Like a ramrod he stands with his head held up high
    with his big shiny helmet and one staring eye
    his weapon is stiff and his voice it is mute
    the impression he gives is one of salute

    So the private parades that he's ready for action
    and those who are watching him see his attraction
    it's all they can do to contain their reaction
    they know that when needed he gives satisfaction

    So they long to take part in a pleasant transaction
    but he can't relax, not even a fraction
    to do so might be an unwanted distraction
    that gets in the way of a strong interaction

    Now standing alone means he could be ignored
    not pampered and feted, loved and adored
    to stand there frustrated by sight and by sound
    as those who would touch him move on all around

    To rise and to shine as they get out of bed
    how many will stop and see his fine head
    his big shining helmet, his one little eye
    as they open the curtains to look at the sky

    He arose in the dark like the lark in the morn
    but surveying the sky as he stands there forlorn
    he longs to be taken in hand to keep warm
    somewhere away from the cold of the storm

    So with quiet dignity he sheds a tear
    a salty wet raindrop shining and clear
    it rolls from his eye and slowly descends
    from his head to his body and on to the end
    of his rigid erection, that stands like a bone
    to do what he's here for, why he was grown
    to bring others joy for the new day ahead
    not slowly to shrink till he's flaccid and dead

    So the soldier erect in his loneliness stands
    he wishes for nothing but warm loving hands
    and kisses to let him know he's really home
    planted with love on the top of his dome


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    There's more where that one came from, but probably not so rude.
     
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  2. Candy Gal

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    That is NOT rude. xxx
     
  3. BJintheUK

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    Glad you think that, others may disagree I'm sure, but I thought it described a sad and lonely little soldier, standing to attention and hoping his relief will be along soon. :)
     
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    Awww it will soon be Christmas surprises. xxx
     
  5. BJintheUK

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    Here's a very short ditty I knocked up yesterday on the spur of the moment, when a young lady sent me a photo of herself, along with the message "Good Morning!"
    As a reply I wrote the following and sent it to her.

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    Up and proud
    no hanging around
    the day moves along
    so sing a bright song
    then shower and dress
    forget all the rest
    they can do their own thing
    while you hum and you sing
    your happiness shines
    all around you the lines
    of your loveliness stretch
    for others to fetch
    and carry today
    while you fly away!

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    Where it came from I've no idea, but the photo of her in the shower just prompted the words there and then.
     
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  6. BJintheUK

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    Here's a short ditty about the action going on in my back garden as I sit here looking out of the window.

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    I've just watched a cat doing this doing that
    ginger all over but with a white tail
    he waited while magpies walked around or they sat
    with a little grey squirrel each morn without fail

    they come to my garden to eat all the food
    I put out on the cast iron table
    where they can all eat their fill from the pale wood
    of the platter that sits there quite stable

    each evening I fill it with nuts and with seed
    and each morning they come to the feast
    so the cat thought he'd join them coz he felt a need
    despite being a pet he's still really a beast

    so he sat on the shed roof and watched the melee
    with tail swishing from side to side
    then pounced when he saw they were looking away
    but they fled and took moments to hide

    so he wandered away with his tail swishing still
    sweeping the wet tiles below
    then the pigeons arrived and they're taking their fill
    where the cat is now nobody knows

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    I know it's not much, but it's a dreary old morning outside, so I thought I'd put fingers to keyboard and see if I could get the old rhyming cells to work.
     
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    I have too many jumpers
    It really is chore
    Trying to put them all way
    Only to go out and buy some more
    My hubby thinks I'm crazy
    With all the clothes I buy
    I just frown and carry on
    But then I must just sigh
     
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  8. BJintheUK

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    The sun's gone down it's the end of the day
    time to put all my toys away
    now is the time to start making dinner
    can't really cook but I do know a winner

    tuna pasta bake is the dish of the day
    when she comes home I know what she'll say
    my favourite food it's all warming and cheesy
    and to make it is just so simple and easy

    when can we have this again my good man
    the next time I get some chopped toms in a can
    coz this time I made it with just some sweet corn
    that's all I could find in the fridge to adorn
    an otherwise boring meal of fish and pasta
    I can't magic it up, and I'm not Jan Canasta

    so eat it up now and then sit there and rest
    and settle yourself into your chair like a nest
    and I'll make some coffee to wash it all down
    then snooze while we digest with a smile not a frown

    the evening rolls on and soon it's time for bed
    up the old staircase to lay down your head
    the land of nod beckons isn't it boring
    we will be out for the count and both snoring


    :)
     
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    Wonderful. X
    Time to get festive. X
     
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  10. BJintheUK

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    I was watching the grey fingers of cloud as they slowly drifted across the sky earlier and quickly jotted down the poem below.

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    Grey fingers of mist creep across the blue sky
    the weather's too windy today it would seem
    for me to go out to my plane for to fly
    to look down on England so lush and so green

    the winter is here but no snow is forecast
    the birds can still feed from the berries and seeds
    that lie on the ground at the place they fell last
    I watch as they forage in tall grass and weeds

    but soon we will see those heavy snow clouds
    drifting across as we watch from the window
    they blot out the sun, turn the sky to a shroud
    white flakes will swirl from the snow clouds the wind blows

    the land will be covered like a sheet on the bed
    the animals lost in their new white surround
    the birds will still forage I'll throw them some bread
    I hope that next year they can still come around

    but Christmas will be here and then all to soon
    it's gone from our sight and is now in the past
    I see next year's coming in my vision it looms
    as I age the years just seem to fly by so fast

    will I get to fly again sometime next year
    who knows what in this world the future may hold
    all I can do now is hope we all hear
    we can get back to living the normality of old

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    :)
     
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  11. BJintheUK

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    Here's one I wrote back in 2015. It's called 'Today's Offering' and was just that at the time.

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    Today arrives in mottled hues
    Of pinks and greys and browns and blues
    The office rings with work untold
    And managers put phones on hold

    Meanwhile looking back a while
    Memories can raise a smile
    Of how things were back in the day
    When paper filled the office tray

    When old time singers sang the blues
    Of iron rails where iron shoes
    On steaming locomotives ran
    On networks that the country span

    The smoke stack billowed out the news
    Of goods and people on the move
    From here to there and there to here
    To meet with those whom we hold dear

    On platforms baggage handlers run
    In rain and snow and wind and sun
    To carry bags and toys and bikes
    For cousin Tim and uncle Mike

    Across the country on the rails
    Ride all this and Royal mails
    Letters carried in their sacks
    By railway workers on their backs

    And loaded in the sorting carriage
    Go pics of someone’s daughter’s marriage
    Mixed with gas and water dues
    And jewellery and pairs of shoes
    Soon workers pack them all in bundles
    And on its way the post train trundles

    Yesterday you posted these
    From Basingstoke and Old Wives Lees
    Now early in the morning post
    In letterboxes coast to coast
    Bills and news of great aunt Mabel
    Land upon the kitchen table

    Dad picks up the morning post
    And reads the mail while eating toast
    Then off to work in plain walled room
    To watch as more big crises loom
    Of paper mountains always growing
    While the work itself is slowing

    What he hopes for is a way
    To sweep the paper piles away
    But then one day we know he’ll see
    On his desk a new PC
    And soon he’ll do his work so fast
    He must find ways to make it last

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    :)
     
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    Just love your poems. xxxx
     
  13. BJintheUK

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    Just looked out the window at the sheets of rain pattering on the window and thought of this;

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    Oh Saturday sadder day, wet and so wild
    you blow me around like a spoilt winter's child
    you send sheets of water to batter the pane
    it feels more like sleet than cold hard rain

    when will you stop and give us a rest
    I know that today you're not at your best
    but surely it's Christmas and we need a break
    so leave us our lawn not a fresh water lake

    it's time we went shopping to get the last gift
    for those we've forgotten, to give them a lift
    so they can remember that we're still here
    it's just what they'll need to give them some cheer

    so go away now and come back when we ask
    you know we still need you to water the grass
    but too much is more than we need this cold day
    so do as we beg you and please go away

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    Happy Saturday! :)
     
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    Love it. Xxxx
     
  15. BJintheUK

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    Just got up and came downstairs to look out at the sunny day, with clear skies and small white fluffy things racing across the sky. 'Must be windy if sheep are out flying!' I thought as I surveyed the scene, then I settled down to write the little ditty below. It's called 'Christmas Post'.

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    Christmas Eve is here at last
    it's almost time to break our fast
    break out the sweets and rich mince pies
    a cornucopia for the eyes (psst, look it up!)

    soon we'll be feasting like there's no tomorrow
    but we'll be so skint we'll have to borrow
    to see us through the week ahead
    but 'Never mind that!' the postman said

    'Here's your gifts and Christmas cards'
    we replied, 'Now don't you work too hard!'
    with that the postman dressed in red
    waved and went next door instead

    the children watched him go and smiled
    does he have that effect on every child?
    do they understand the job he does
    bringing hope and news and joy for us

    but on he goes his merry way
    somehow cheerful every day
    he whistles as he walks along
    and sometimes breaks into a song

    we hear him on his daily round
    while most of us are sleeping sound
    he's out there trudging in all weather
    in flannel shorts and shoes of leather

    up with the lark most every day
    he bags his post then on his way
    his round is busy this time of year
    we should invite him in for a beer

    he might appreciate the gesture
    that's not to say he'd stop to rest for
    even a moment to whet his whistle, no
    not when there's a lady with mistletoe

    waiting for his morning call
    she's in her dressing gown in the hall
    with hair brushed neatly back from her face
    she listens for his friendly pace

    and when the knock comes on the door
    she's there with a kiss and maybe more
    for the last call on his round has come
    now he can rest, he's reached his home

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    OK! That's your lot till after Christmas, so have a good time and stay safe, and I'll be back again some time next week. Cheers!
     
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    Love it. Xxxx
     
  17. BJintheUK

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    Hello again, got bored with lying in this morning, so came down and jotted down this little ode. It's called 'The Sales Are Here!', so guess what it's about?

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    Now Christmas Day has come and gone
    the New Year sales will soon be on
    we'll struggle with coats and hats and gloves
    and try to keep warm as we travel in droves
    along to the shops to join in the melee
    with all the rest of them on Boxing Day

    the poor shop assistants look weary already
    not long from their beds they still aren't ready
    for the onslaught of shoppers all red in the face
    who grab what they can, coz they think it's a race
    to get at the bargains before the next man
    I swear when the doors opened some of them ran!

    they rush to the aisles to search for the cheap
    and grab what they can to buy and to keep
    then off to their homes to boast of their booty
    they parade in their finery nose up and snooty
    thrilled at the bargains they managed to bag
    even though to those watching it looks like old rag

    every year is the same when the rush starts to form
    when Christmas time's over it's back to the norm
    of hustle and bustle and bargain and haggle
    to get what we can, so it's best not to straggle
    or you'll miss the best buys, the cream of the crop
    and the price will be double the next time you shop!

    then January rolls around into the frame
    and the wildness of Christmas our money has claimed
    so it's back to the grindstone to pay for it all
    and save for our holidays, hot beaches call
    they bid us to join them when Summer comes round
    so we'll scrimp and we'll scrape just to save a few pound

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    Phew, that's better! I've got that off my chest,
    now for a nice cup of coffee and a well earned rest! :)
     
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    I must go out and look at these so called sales.
     
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    Just thought of another one. I guess this one will have to be called 'Eek!'

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    Got up this morning and then thought Eek!
    New Year's Eve is only next week
    what can I do to ring in the new year
    who can I ask to join with me here?

    after all, with all the restrictions in place
    it's getting hard now to even see a new face
    knowing where to look is what it's all about
    I wonder if I should just stand up and shout?

    Who in the town would even hear me make noise
    just the odd feral cat and a group of young boys
    stood on the corner with fags in their pockets
    jangling loose change and cleaning the sprockets

    on the wheels of their bikes that they use to ride
    from home to the shops for more ciggies to hide
    from parents and coppers and anyone else
    who might tell them off for hurting their health

    So onward and upward the old saying goes
    we'll be in next year before we even know it
    then what will happen is down to the gods
    and who knows what they think the uncaring sods!

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    :)
     
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    I wanted to go out today and look around some shops
    Then I heard some awful news, the variant made some stops
    So my town will be heading into another Tier
    It really makes me shudder, living life in fear
    So inside my house, I will stay, hoping for a better day
    At least I have this forum, a place where I can play
     

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