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roly · Feb 2, 2005

Fragments of feeling

Smashed; the fragments lie,
Distanced; my security,
Shards; glimmering, my memories shine
Broken; mind sent into dissaray,
Nothing to live for but one constant,
I rest in your arms tonight.

roly · Feb 2, 2005

humandraydel said:

You too huh? For every little kid I see I cannot help but think this. It instantly reminds me of the fact that I will not introduce a child to this society.

I like your poem. It has some very interesting, provocative lines. An even better experiment would be to first post the poem and ask people what they think it means. It'd be interesting to see different responses.

Anyway, I guess I'll join in. I'm definitely not a poet as I'm more of a weird science type but I wrote a couple short poems recently, so what the hell!

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A Whisper

As the sun rises your smile warms my heart
The leaves rustle and your laugh comforts my mind
A songbird trills but all I hear is your voice
As you softly whisper "I love you"

Gazing at the star filled sky I get lost in your eyes.
Basking in the moonlight I feel your gentle touch
The wind howls as dreams completely envelop me
And you slowly whisper "I want you"

And if the sky should weep I'll wipe away your tears
And if the earth should shatter I'll pick up the pieces
When you weakly whisper "I need you"

humandraydel
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Excellent....truly amazing so passionate and tender...wow...*is blown away*

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