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Aye, 'tis. I don't even remember doing that :S

 

For the record, I don't think your girl looks like a boy. She's hot.

 

Oooh...why thank you. I think this calls for another semi-nude filler...

 

Page 23...woo.

 

Duke's gonna get laid!

 

Not! Thanks to Pete *stab* (Note - this page was a flashback...Let me know if you caught onto that from the page before this one)

 

Aw, damn. Poor Duke.

 

deletion

 

deletion?

Hey! I've actually just revamped a couple of pages and I'd like to know what people think! Let me know if it clarifies things more

Page 1:

and Page 4:



Better? Worse? Neither?

 

I think you should stick with introducing him where you did before. When Pete discovers him with the pom poms, so do the readers. Show us rather than tell us. That's just my opinion though.

 

Hmm...The readers still are introduced to him in the same way though. There's just a little bit of added info. People just claimed that my characters lacked depth in the early pages of the comic and I thought that by doing this, it would add some depth to them.

 

Page 24...Next page will be somewhat interesting. Apologies for the page stretch

PS. Some random dude just commented on my comic saying "Your writing is REALLY weak". Now I'm not sure if this is just some dipshit who's being nasty (some people on that site deliberately give shit to other people for some completely obscure reason, or if my comic really is just a boring hunk of shit and he's the first person to be honest about it. Please just tell me :S I just want to know what people HONESTLY think. I'm not here to build up my self-esteem and I don't want people to be nice. I just want to know if people think my comic is actually any good or not.

Thanks

 

I don't think the writing is weak. I like it.

 

Page 25...New characters omg.



Mind if I ask, but why has the "Journal Module" been deactivated?

 

I think the journal module's deactivation is related to the upcoming server upgrade.

I like the addition and am eager to see how the new character/situation weaves into the established players.

 

Hehe...These guys are sure to make the story more interesting...or awkward. Or both probably. Anyway - is the art getting better just out of interest? And another thing fyi - all the little pictures on the side and in the background were little things I drew

 

It's those details that add immeasurable quality to the piece as a whole.

 

Page 26 and I am fuckin' sick. Might update later in the week but I feel seriously shite right now:

 

Health now... art later. Rest up and get well dude.

 

Word. Exams start tomorrow which doubly sucks. Ill probably miss those. I actually drew this one a few days ago...probably won't be more for a few days...